I completely like and agree with the lines
"You are my life, my death, my dream and grief,
I love you much, but you make my life so brief."

that is how love turns us into only thinking one thing; only she or he we have love for!

I hv to agree.. i loved this poem.. really deep.. well thought of, u obviously experienced love..and pain.. well written xxx

WOW! You are really good I enjoy reading your poems!! Check out mine some times under stephanie!!

I like you imagery a great deal, and your ideas. Well done indeed.

Awwwwwwww, sweet and beautiful poem! Great job. Tus poemas son bellisimos! Me gustan mucho tus poemas por que estan llenos de amor/sentimiento...really great poem 5/5 Please, always keep writing.

~Gesselle~
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Awwwwww...sooo sweet...where the heck do u got all of ur ideas from..this is just neautiful and don't let anybody else tell u other wise