Great poem im sorry to hear about your dad n all again tha same thing happened to me. u should read my poem A Fathers Betrayal and tell me what you think... oh yeah 5/5

That's so sad... good work though.
take care, xoxoxo

Well done i thought it was great just a shame it really does happen to some people. well keep writting. james xoxox>5

Thats a good poem but im sorry it happened to you 5/5
~Britt~

Amazing amazing poem, not your best? dont believe it!! your a talented writer and im so sorry all that had to happen to ya!!! im here for you anytime!!!
-liz

That was very good and sad i think people that run out on there kids are sorry as hell 5/5

That sucks...i didn't know my read did either so i can feel ya on that one..it's good check out my other one called silent night..jus wrote it keep em comin 5/5 nicely done peace

I know how it feels to grow up without a dad my dad left when i was a baby i had to grow up without him!

I grew up in a bad home 2 and I if you eva need somone to talk to e-mail me at wild_n_crazydestiny@yahoo.com