Wow, this poem is awsome i really loved it, i can totally relate. I think it flowed nicley it used good vocabulary, and i never would of thought to relate cutting to a clown. Very original 5/5 keep writting.

Thanku guys! xxx

That was amazing emma, really amazing. Best one yet, Im really proud of you, u know that?

Wow dude, very good

Thanku! luv u xx

BEAUTIFUL MAN BE STRONG FOR THE REVOLUTION XXXXX

Yes!! errr...for the revolution lol! xxx

Wow the rhyming was wonderful and the idea of the poem was great as well
there is so much creativity in the poem
i loved it
just beautiful

Thanku so much xxx

Excellent job!- 5/5

You are an amazing poet! I like how you described the masking in comparison to the clown. Great work!! 5/5
~*Amber*~

Emma, Thank-you so much for your comments on my poems....it helps to know people are reading. Your poems contiune to amaze me. You explain things so well. smiles and luvs
Michelle

Thanku, it means a lot :) xxxxx

I'm beginning to feel like a broken record but you so deserve all the praise, I don't know if I can add to it but keep up the amazing comparisons and imagery!

Emma, i can so totally relate with this poem!
Braclettes definetley have helped me A LOT!! You know what, your an amazing writer!!

Another awsome poem. emma your poems are brilliant....i want to read them all...they are wonderful and beautiful...although sad...but they have so much for them..and you have a lot going for you...great job on this poem 5 again!