Comments : The Deceitful One

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    That's pathetic... Anyway, awesome poem.

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by corrina

    Wow someone actually understands what i am going through great job cheack out my poems you will like the broken friendships ones lol well 5/5 great poem once more

  • 17 years ago

    by ILOVEMRCUCUMBER

    That's horrible!! you are so selfish! if your friend is cutting herself and telling you she drinks febreeze, you need to talk to her and help her! she needs someone to talk to, about why shes doing those things! if you dont, before you know it, she'll have commited suicide!
    1/5 because its a good poem, just not a good subject

  • 16 years ago

    by Marylou L

    To start off, im sorry that happened to you. its never any fun. but you wrote it well. good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Stacey Campeau

    That was written incredible! I'm sorry to hear that happened to you but you got your emption out on paper and it was sad but beautiful. 5/5.