I have NO idea why but it kind of reminded me of the film: the omen trilogy.. this was a really good poem keep it up!!
kt xx

Thanks!

Wow,....cool

Awesome! Me likey:) Keep up the good work babe. *huggles and smoochers*

~Jessica

It was a good poem... a lot different than what I've read before, but the originality is awesome... keep writing, ur an awesome poet!
Love always,
BJ

I love this poem, its great. keep up the great writing.

Wow! powerful stuff!!!