Message To The Abusive

by DaN   Sep 7, 2005


Stop striking me
its hurts so much
you do it in every way
physically and mentally
you drench me in blood
you strike me with your hands
you scream at me with cruelty
stop it i cant handle it

im not going to be your 10th victim
all the others lost
their lifes because of you
your a murderer
and I have to stop you

you cant get away with it
causing people pain
scaring their minds
and then ending their lives
try and stop me
im running away
ill break your stuff
ill break your spirit

you have no soul
you have no emotions
your heart is cold
and as solid as steel

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  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    YES. YES. YES. THEY MUST DIEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wow, alot of emotion in that piece. I liked it :) Hopefully, though- thats not real life. Because if so, you need to get help..and you need it soon. If not, you create a good visual that it is happening..i applaud you for that. Nice Job!

    -Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by LJ loves Rob

    Ud tell me if this was tru woodnt u i mean i hope to god it isnt but i cant b sure with u sum times. Can u comment on mine especially 1 for sum weird guy i used to noe called daniel LOL . ok anyways Love Ya So Much LJ

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