Comments : The Proposal

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlee

    Omg! im soo sorry if this is true...i just got engaged with my boyfriend myself. i really hope everthing works out for you!!! im sooo sorry! i have no idea what u must be feeling but i hope u never feel it again. the poem was excellent, alot of feeling! smile, it'll get better! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Hey aaron,
    Its me KALA!!!!!!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN BOY!!!!!!!!! Thanks for calling me for the past month or two -says it starcasticly- Honestly I swear you need to call me sometime!!!!!!!!!!! Well I loved this poem but the ending was sad! I hope that doesn't happen to you.

    Call me sometime time Love ya
    Kala

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    O M F G
    u mind is weird and demented and i luv how u think babe so who was that 4? says nosy** umm email me babe
    luv ya lots
    tess

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awwww, Aaron... That is such a sad, sad poem... I like how you put a twist in the end... Throughout the poem you make it seem like the girl will say yes, but in the end she says goodbye... WOW... I wish I was as good of a poet as you... and any girl would be stupid to say goodbye to you... I love you lots, my bestestest friend in the whole wide world!
    Love always,
    BJ