Oh...my...lord!! This has got to be my favorite poem I've read today!! I mean I have no idea what to say! That last line gave me goosebumps and a chill down my spine, I absolutley love poems that make me do that!! Wonderful Job writing this!!!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

This was a touching write, Bill. Truly can make you think...you know we all probably have things in our past we wish we could erase but we can't. We learn by them and carry on... Great job....

hugs, love, Ann

Oh how true, somethings we can never escape from...... wonderfully written.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

"only a lucky few can escape their past." this poem is so true. I got chills reading it. Excellent write!

Nice. you wrote about an off topic and you did very well its kool to hear some of those sometimes

Bill,

That was an extremely good write and the title was so fitting for the poem which added a very good finishing touch to the whole thing.

Regards,

Steve

This was very well written. You have loads of talent. My favorite verse was:
Stomach in your chest
Heart pounding in your ear
Do not stop no time for rest
You are driven by fear
I added you to may favs list. Check out one of my poems if you get a chance. I would love tohear what you think. I am always interested in improving my skills.

That shit was hot do your thing boy.

Great job. I really like that one. Keep up the great work. It really flowed well.
~Neens~

I love this. very thought provoking..even haunting in a sense. One can relate to the fear of such a thing. there is something we all wish to escape from the past..

The punchline 'only a lucky few can escape their past' really jumps out and made me reread the poem again. I escaped my past by turning to God and gaining forgiveness and freedom. You are a very good writer encapsulating deep thoughts in a concise but poetic way.

Wow, this is so so true! I love this poem so much! Excellent choice of words, fantastic write!

Dude this poem is awesome I love it keep writing and well..... ROCK ON! lol