5/5 Just lovely and sweet...."Just want to love you for the eternity"...really strong words and sweet! Great Job...Take care and keep it up!

5/5.. it very cute and heartfelt!! amaing job. i really loved the qoute you left on my comment. it was awsome!! thank you soo much for taking the time to give me a comment. means alott..
lotz of love~lilia~

Awwww this is very sweet. with the way u write i would hope you have a great girl to shar it with:) thx for the comment:)

Again some parts rhyme but some dont. but it was easy to follow and i understood it so 5/5

This ones very sweet. well done

I loved it. it, it may not rhyme allt he way through but it works! it was great. keep up the good work.

Jacs
xxx

Awww !! Really nice poem, sooooo cute, i loved it.

xxx cici xxx

Im sorry lol i dont agree with you that hand and one sound good together but if it works for you its all that matters because it didnt rhyme all over i didnt really pick up the rhyming at all i just read it and i loved it i dont think it needed to rhyme i think your did a perfect job at displaying your feelings and i think it was great good job

AWWWW....que lindo...this is one lucky gurl...hold on to her and treat her the way a gurl likes to be treated...u r a very talented guy and i like that...5/5

This was so very sweet and I adored the title. It really caught my interest and right away. The flow was great and it had so much emotion. Great job HansRik. And thank you so much for the comment on my poem. It really made my day:)

I liked it (lol... im speechless practically)

Now this is my type of poem ...
It is romantic and sweet ....
A beautiful sweet flowing piece ...
Beautiful job....HansRik

Very cute and sweet.. i enjoyed reading your poem... keep it up

sammie