Jodie,
this is a sweet and sad little poem...just want you to know that I love it. So well written and it flow well, good poem 5/5 tak ecare and keep it up with the great work.

Wow ur latest poem i see detials wat happeneed when u get on tell me but besides that i love ur poem it's really good love ya jodie -muah-

Real good poem jodie...
thanks for leaving a comment on my poem...pls read my other feature poem & leave a comment & i'll do the same ; )

*tear* wow jodie i swear god i love ur poems ur so good and i know how u feel and it sucks so bad and i wish u didnt feel this way no more if i could i would take ur sorrow ur pain ur sins into me so u wouldnt feel it no more

Ur poem is very sad.. i liked it espacially this part i thought you loved me
you said it all the time
but you left me feelings pathetic
broken to pieces inside

keep writing.. ur very talented

I know how u feel its tough

Yea i kno how it feels
good job <3

You have a talent girl dont ever stop writing....great flow again, pain clearly expressed, truly heartfelt