This is very romantic but ofcourse sad. I must say you've written it nicely. The start and the end is really great! Believe me it's really an honest comment not a biased one!! I loved this one! Just keep writing!

Aww hun. this is sad but brilliant xox

Very touching and heartfelt, nicely written .

regards
--chavii--

This was so heart touching........deeply felt..
i adore ur work dear

keep writing
Bharti