Amazing.

A great expression and style and you're ideas were put to good use. An intense yat accurate poem with good meter. Take Care and keep using you're talent!
luv kt

I like it. yes,im wearing a mask but i try my best to not show the hate and misery my family gives... mee....

Well expressed, just a little bit sketchy in places, but nothing at all to be concerned with. I like the concept greatly.

Amazing poem. very well written. so true. great concept and style. 5/5 awsome job!

That was so beautiful and true. I think you have a great talent and you should keep writing. Keep it up. *5/5*
~Thanks for reading mine.

This was an interesting poem indeed. It took me a minute to get it, I guess I am just slow today, but everyone has off days. You have your own style and I like that. Nice job.

-Tainted Mikochan

God knows how much truth this poem carries, apart from the fact that its very wellwritten, its also realistic.
well done...
its one of the best poems i ever read on poems-and-quotes... seriously..
take care

Wow, that was incredible... and you're right, it was like my poem!
5/5

Allanah

I like how original each piece is.
different each time.
5/5
this piece still lacked something though.
It broke in its flow.
Some lines were too long but I know its an old piece so it doesnt matter.
=)
~Emah