I loved it and i can relate your a good writer!!!! the end kinda scared me though it sounded kinda stockerish but it was still awesome!!!
Joclyn

I love the content very much...you state very clearly the reason you love her...and it's very sweet...but I think it didn't flow quite well...so...I figure you should change the word a little bit...don't change the meaning though...here is my suggestion...

Why it meant to be this way
When all i was trying is to love you
Sometimes when you cross my mind
my heart melt for some reasons
Because I love you.

I've tried to go on
like I never knew you
I've tried to forget all about you
But voices tell me that I should keep loving you
and I'm walking in a dark all alone.

All I ever wanted was to die in your arms
all I ever wanted was to love you
like nobody does
Every time when I hear your name from somewhere
my heart skips a beat because I love you.

And I will still be here for you
and I wanna let you know this
"without you all I'm going to be is EMPTY!"
and I will always be here and love you.
Because you are my girl
Because I love you, and you belong to me!

Lol...I'm not so sure what I've corrected...you can read it and see the difference...don't mnd me...but did you get the inspiration to write this poem from the song Incomplete by Backstreet Boys...it sure seems like it...anyway...I love it...very sweet...but make you don't force the sentence next time...like...if you read it out loud...you'll know what I mean...lol...I'm not a very good poet...I just hope I can help you...

Wow, creative perfect feelings. i like it. great work

Great poem and wow just keep up the good work on writting poems bc that was a great poems

Very nice poem!!
keep writting