Very touching, you have a way with words, good job.

DAVID,
JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I LOVE THIS POEM...ITS SUCH A TOUCHING YET SO SAD AN DCUTE POEM. jUST LOVELY THE WAY YOU ENDED THE POEM WAS REALLY AMAZIN' NICE JOB 5/5 KEEP IT UP AND CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE POEMS...KEEP WRITING

Very emotional....I really love this poem. I hope you write more and more. I can see that you have talent. ;) Keep it up!

Smile,
Black~Rose