You have kept me strong

by BloodScars   Sep 12, 2005


Now i know
your safe with me
you'll hold me tight
you'll make me see

now i know
you'll be there at night
you'll hold my hand
whenever its right

now i know
you'll be there for me
when i need you the most
now i know you'll care for me
now that we are close

they might now see it
how much better you are
you might not be hot or sexy
but you have healed my scar

the pain and torture
i have waited so long
you have released it
you have kept me strong

you have been there for me
not caring about my faults
not caring about yours
your who has set me free

you love me for me
unlike everyone else
your not the jerk
who i used to see

I'll hold u tight
and never let go
i will always understand
what you have to know

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, keep up the flow. I'm not really a fan of repetitive parts. But still, nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I'm sure there are things within this poem that I couldn't understand as I don't know you and your situation and that I think is really neat. I write that way some times and people ask a lot what I meant. Even if I shared a lot is between two people that no one else can see. I can kind of see that in this piece.

    I have one suggestion though:
    "now i know
    you'll be there for me
    when i need you the most
    now i know you'll care for me
    now that we are close"
    being that this has one more line than all the other stanzas it throws the flow off a bit. I think you should shorten it to 4 lines as all the rest.

    Other than that I like this poem...Nice write my friend! :)

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