Wow i loved that poem you are great at your writing. keep up the awsome work.....luv and huggs....missy

Dats really good! i get this feeling! its so..idk hard to deal with. i love the last part "if love is so strong, why am i here, writing this, instead of enjoy your presence, your love, your kiss?" dude! dats awesome. great poem.

Thats sooo true! 5/5

Wow

Excellent poem, but that dont sound like love... more like a broken heart.Good Job!Lots of emotion!

Wow this was really good to...i think you choice your words very well...and the flow was pretty much perfect from what i can see....5/5

Very intentative poem. Just add the R to this stanza

If love's so great,
Why am I sitting here, writing this,
Instead of enjoying you,
You((R)) presence, your love, your kiss?

And it will be just great! Thanks.

Nice i enjoyed it.
So many good points, i think everyone feels that way at some point.

xxx cici xxx

Awwwww very cute 5/5

Your writeing gets better and better as i read on

Wow thats amazing it crazy thought love hurts so bad but we all want to have it ya know what i mean.. anyways 5.5 keep up the amazing work your a great writer

Brilliant again proper liked it xxxxxxxxx