You are truly talented. I like the internal rhyme in the first line. In fact, the whole line sets out your emotion, and anger, and, of course, the desperation evident throughout. Great diction, some dark imagery would be fantastic. This was a great poem. Keep it up!

I really liked this poem. Deep. :)

I love this poem...i can totally relate SOOO well...its an unbelievable poem...very deep...a lot of feeling and pain in it 5/5

I felt it
great poem
keep writing