5/5 that is ace so true

Thank you for the comments, i like this poem very well written,

Sensitive & emotional it is !!
good work
5/5
god bless !!

First of all, Silver, you are beautiful! I am awed by the beauty not only of your face, but also of your heart as expressed by your poems. This was just great! Some punctuation in the ending line lacking, but otherwise perfect. Nice emotional sensations! Great word usage and imagery. The title is very appropriate and I can only give you a 5/5. Great job!

Sensitive and emotional indeed. But wonderfully honest, and well-described.

Very emotional,very good and your very beautiful by the way 5/5

This is a but confusing....but thats just b/c im a dumb ass...ha....i absolutly loved it it was utterly amazing....very deep and beautiful...5/5

This is different, nice ideas. the las to lines are very deep and painful, well the entire poem is deep and painful in a way, thats what makes it good. you know you've accomplished something when you ull the emotions out of the readers heart. Good Job

Wow amazing job keep up the good work. 5.5

Wow..this is REALLY good...one of my favs! 5/5 good job!
Becky
xoxo

-blinks- ....................... This is one of the strangest poems I have ever read. First I'm thinking about flying pigs, then I'm reading about you looking into a mirror, and now I am wondering how pigs have to do with a mirror. Please explain it to me!!

Um, I didn't quite get the whole story, but it sounded bitter, like people miss the whole unbelievable things about life because they're too busy being consumed by their disbelief. That was a great topic.

Good Writing!
beth

I liked the message. mthe flow was kinda off and it didnt all fit together but it all made sense.

Great poem, took two reads thought to understand fully, but i love the concept of it and its very well written

Great work, this poem was so well written. Amazing job once again.

You have True talent

Good job! And yeah it did sound a bit confusing, But when i re-read it, Theres little sections in there that mean different things, I think. Well to me they did. Anywho, 5/5 I really liked this poem!

- natz x0x