Wow....
i like it
you're a very talented writer- keep up the great work

Very good didn't have much ryhme to it but who cares very good5/5

I liked your poem it reminded me of a time when I felt kinda the same. you get a lot of feelings out in it.

Not reallt a ryhming scheme but it was still really good , keep it up

This poem has a beat to it expressing many emotions

Aww this is sooo true. very well written. it flowed really nicely together. keep it up 5/5

~Kristina

This poem was great. great write, awsome read. i stayed in it till it was finished good job.