Comments : Be in your Heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    OMGSH!! CAR!!! THATS INCREDIBLE!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Car,
    This is so beautiful and heartfelt....I truly know where you're coming from. Isn't it strange how we want someone that we know we can't have?????

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    You will have it all in time, my dear.... no need to rush, but it is painful waiting, isn't it? A beautiful and touching write.....

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • Oooh!!! geuss who likes this poem!!!.....
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    ME!!!!! hoorah!! great poem babe!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sick.&.Tired.Of.Waiting

    Hey, Car....this is sadly my new account.....i had to ....

    I'm about to cry...my awards...they're all going to be gone....*tear*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sick.&.Tired.Of.Waiting

    Um....
    Well....
    I've gotten some violation emails from the forums....
    And if you get enough of those, they permanently suspend your account-hence losing all your poems!
    And I don't want to.....
    So I made an account in advance..lol!!

    ((You're up early))

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Beautiful poem hun, yet so sad. the last stanza is simply amazing. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Forbidden fruit is sweet. wut a sweet poem. i feel that it did tell me a lot about u. u wrote it carefully and organized but that didn spoli the music. i enjoed reading each stanza.5/5 no doubt.

    take care,
    wishes