Very sad and I know how ur friend feels I lost the man I loved 17 yrs ago and I still miss him but I have since moved on but I have and never will ever forget him or the pain I felt tell your friend to hang on it will get better I promise

Awe thanks for the compliment! You are an incredible writer as well!
Jen

Aww very swwet and tell youre friend that im sorry and that he is still with her all the time even thought she caint see him dosent mean he isnt there

~*BrItTaNy*~

Aww such a sad st0ry! i kn0w exactly h0w y0ur friend feels having l0st 6 0f my go0d friends earlier this year. i wr0te a p0em 0n it called Forever y0ung ;x if if y0u w0uld like t0 take a lo0k... tell y0ur friend t0 keep her chin up and i h0pe y0ure d0ing 0kay to0.
im sure hes up in heaven watching d0wn 0n her and very pr0ud t0 have pe0ple like her that l0ved him s0 much. life is to0 sh0rt s0 tell every0ne h0w much y0u l0ve them whenever p0ssible!
beautiful p0em, keep up the great w0rk!
l0ve maddy x0ox

Wow. thats enough to bring a tear to my eye. That is really good. Im sorry for your lose.

This poem is so sweet. I lost someone I loved very much 10 years ago...my daddy. Tell your friend to hang in there I know how she feels. Check out my poem This is what happens... Feel free to comment. Keep up the good work

Aww that is sad and im srry for your and her lose. yo r a goo wrighter as well. just tell her to keep on thinking of the good not the bad and to remember that he is always there.

I love it.. im soo srry:(

:'( Very well written, I like how you wrote it from her point of view. Very good.

I love it. So sad. So full of emotion. Your a very talented writer.

Aww this made me cry...
so sad, well wirtten!
xo

Tears streaming down my face. It's very emotional and sad. Words grab your attention immedietly. I love the fact that you wrote it from her point of view. When I lost my best friend, it broke my heart. And this poem brings back the past and reminds me of my friend. That's how strong this brilliant poem is. It's absolutely wonderful. Keep it up!

Ghost

Very heartbreaking. I'm sorry