Comments : I want to live!

  • 18 years ago

    by chris

    Read your comemnt on my last poem and my position on rape was not liek children and the helpless it was people who set themselves up for it and basically bring it on themselves. again sorry if it was offensive i just feel like girls dont realize what they get themselves into sometime and they should be aware of how they go about life.

  • 18 years ago

    by snezana

    Aawwhhh that is very sad :(((( but its still very gooooood!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Hey Neens ...How ya feeling girl ?
    I got to say I really loved this stanza :

    Better get to hiding the knife
    I won't give up on life
    Just have to handle the strife
    I plan on being someone's wife

    There is alot of courage being released in this stanza...
    Hold on to your faith girl .... It will see you through the hard times ....
    You will beat this ....
    ~Take care sweets ~
    Sending you many hugs ....