Your poem is very good but ending your life because it gets alittle hard deosnt mean you have to hurt yourself . life gets like that sometimes but we all have to stay strong. i know how you feel because i was thinking the same way a couple of months of go. your very talented and who cares what ppl have to say about you. your great! i hope you do the right thing i will be praying for you. if you ever want to talk you can e-mail me at usher0816@msn.com ok take care love chas.

I feel the same way all the time and I can't trust anyone, don't trust anyone except yourself cuz truly they're all traitors. Hun, you don't know how bad my lif is right now and if you kill yourself that'l be enough to push me over the edge into death. So if you kill yourself you'll be killin' me too..

HurtChild

Omg please dont kill yourself i feel like im one of your frineds we have a lot in common we express our true feelings throu our poems...please dont do this to your family and friends i kno its hard but please try to pull throu ask god to help you he will...just please dont kill yourself is that the way you want to say goodbye to your family and friends do u want them to remember the way you die as sucide...dont do this dont make the biggest mistake of your life you have so much ahead of you,a baby a family of your own, a wedding, college,everything...think about all this and write back on one of my peoms but about this not that poem answer me on this topic...please

Please do not commit suicide. You are a wonderful person. I do not know what is leading you to do it, but it would be terrible to lose you . Please do not commit suicide. Life is too beautiful. Suicide is just the escape of the cowards. I had a friend who committed suicide, and all the pain and misery he left for us was great. Please think of your friends and family before you do it. My birthday is on the 26th, and I would not want to celebrate just three days after your suicide.

Your poem was really deep, & emotional it maked me feel inspiration to write one..
Kidd HOLD ON i bet theirs pleny of ppl who love u & caree TALK TO THEM..!
thiink about it & take extraa caree:*

Joliee

Hey girl very good poem and well written.. take it from some one that has gone down the road that you are going trough now.. you may feel like shit right know but stay strong and keep your head up no matter what.. dont break down i know i don't no you but if u would like to talk don't hasitate and email me at Yanell05@yahoo.com trust me u have a long way to go don't cut ur life short i would love to talk to you and share my experience with you please think about it and email me....

Hey girl that is some deep stuff, But please take life serious. I know how u feel and its not worth it.. I lost my baby sister that took her own life, u just dont hurt yourself but other that love you dearly.. Its been a yr since my sis been gone and everynight i cry myself to sleep. So please think about what your doing..

September 23rd? ... well todays the 19th.... thats like.... 4 days... well i know i cant say dont do it, because basically its none of my business, but my only problem here is, is that i think you should write some more poems first, because you're pretty good..... so yeah...

*smile? :)*

katy

Nice poem overall. Sometimes, however, it seems you are sacrificing the depth and intensity of the poem to be able to rhyme. Rhyming poems aren't always the best, so don't give up what you're trying to say to make it rhyme, I know I've fallen into that trap more that once. You also need to realize that you are not the only one in that spot. Most teens go through a depressed/suicidal stage, I know I did and I'm just getting out...or going back in. Anywho...I know what its like to be suicidal, and I know that you don't set a date. Not to sound cruel and don't take it the wrong way, but if you were that set on doing it, you would have already. Putting that date down is an attention thing to find out how many people will message and say not to do it. And to those who said if you're going to, fill the rest of your days, YOU ARE SHITTY PEOPLE. Thats flat out wrong, and I will apologize for them and how they said that. Noone should ever tell anyone its okay to go through with that, because its not. Realize suicide is a very selfish thing. Back to needing attention, it is obvious that you have many people willing to listen to you...get your attention that way.

Hey girl, wonderfuly writtin. but I don't even know you and I am crying at the thought of you dieing, hun I'm sure you have at lest one thing to live for, if not, I'm here I know you don't know me or any thing but I am here for anyone who needs someone to talk to or just some one to cry with. I will talk to anyone and I won't tell anyone if you don't want. and I am always here if you need any thing just email me at blackpedalrose@sbcglobal.net

Lots O' Love
BloodRedRose

p.s. I may not know you but remember I will always love you for the talent you have put into your poems, I feel like I do know you, but I am here for you.

That was a great poem and i just wanted to say hold on. if you can make it to that day, why not keep going.

Hey, if you choose to follow through with that, think of all the people that you will hurt. I dont know you, or your circumstances, but, i DO know you are an awesome writer, and killing yourself wont really prove anything... PS september 23, is two of my bast mates birthdays, and i will be thinking of you.. much love, take care

YOU CANT GIVE UP! YOU CANT GO!I know that i dont know you but i was there and i know how it feels, i know what its like to lose every thing and wnat to go- i was all most gone on the 13! Gone juist gone forever....i would be gone but i ran into some friends and they forced me to tell them what i did and i was at school when i did it, but the only reason i was there was to drop off my good bye letters to my locker partner.... dont do it - its not worth it - if you think no one cares i do

I no u dnt want ppl teling u not 2 kill urself but im gona say it neway u may not no me and i may not no u. but even if dis doesnt make a difference i at least no i tried. but plz u r bound 2 hav ppl arund dat will cruy 4 da rest of their life if u leave them. i can c it is a hard time 4 but u can get thru it. i hav. email me id be gald 2 talk. or email me if u ddnt do it....stephxoxo

OMg that was amazing!!!!! I love that! you have an amazing talent! Keep writing I'll keep readin!

Love ya girl
Brooke

This is a very sad poem!!! very good to!! but dont go...if u need ppl to talk to im pretty sure everyone on here is willing to listen.....i am.....u can make it thru this.....trust me....i did its not hard at all!! just please dont do it!! ur not f**ked up or nothin!! some ppl just look at our faults instead of the good things! yah life does suck but dont take ur life just cuz of this....u got ppl who really do care about u!! look at all the ppl that have commented u and said there here for u....its a promise well always keep!! ull be with danielle and vanessa soon...just not now!!! were all praying and hoping for the best for u!!!! if u ever need to talk...im here!! always will be!! juggalettebaby@msn.com

much love
allie

HEY, UR POEM WAS AMAZING!! LOOK I KNOW YOU'VE OBVIOUSLY HAD LOTS OF PEOPLE SAY DONT DO IT, AND I FOR ONE DONT THINK YOU SHOULD! YOU'VE GOT LOADS OF TALENT, DONT WASTE IT.

IVE FELT THE SAME AS YOU, BIELIVE ME, AND I HAD TO DO IT ON MY OWN. I TRYED TO COMMENT SUIICDE, BUT AS YOU CAN ALREADY GUESS IM HERE AND IT DIDNT QUITE GO TO PLAN.

IF YOU EVER WANT TO TALK TO SOMEONE WHO'S BEEN THERE, EMAIL ME OR IF YOU HAVE MSN TALK TO ME MY ADDY IS eat_my_monkey@hotmail.co.uk

MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU, PLEASE AT LEAST TRY AND CONTACT ME BEFORE YOU COMIT SUICIDE, I NO IT FEELS LIKE NO ONE CAN HELP, BUT U'D BE SURPRISED.

MUCH LOVE XXX HANNAH xxx

Plz hun dont go xox

Is this a true story bout you r u crazy? yopu have isssues if this is bout you i hope i don't become this way cuz i tried many tyimes to go sucidel but then i think of who i would miss even if they don't care bout me i hope you settel your problem i love the poems read and comment mine if you will

yuors trully
donovansgurl05

Tell me your not telling the truth!! I know that nothing in this world can be that bad to want to take your life!! Over all an excellent poem!!! 5/5