Because i thought.....

by fallentears   Sep 16, 2005


Because I thought you'd be there
To show me that you care
Because I thought I was still dreaming
In this life that I'm barely living in
Because I thought we'd be together forever
My one true love
Because I thought we'd spend the rest of our lives together
I guess I was wrong
Because I thought you were different to the other guys
I saw through your deceit
Because when you left my hopes and dreams disappeared

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Seems like it could be added to, lines are a bit abrubt, but well formed in themselves, and well written besides.

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Ouch, that's sad. But it rang with a certain truth...that sounded nice.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very very good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    You are really a good writer but i think you should make a good suprising ending

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By fallentears