Thats sad...Tears come in many forms.
Keep your head up!!!
~neens~

This is really a neat way of putting this:) keep up the great work hun, and thankyou for the comment:)

Jenn x0x

Wow, very powerful, keep it up

U really get a sense of what ur trying to convey by the repetition of the words. nice job!

Wow this was good....the only thing i would do is change where some of the words are placed...i think that some of the words are placed on the wrong line making the poem harder to understand. The thoughts are scattered i guess is what im trying to say...but other then that i like it...very short and very deep....leaves the reader with many questions...i like that....anyway..thanks for the comment on my poem it really means a lot! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Wow this poem is good i have written one alot like i think its called blood, its a little different but still. this poem is really good i can relate to all your stuff( well so far anyway lol) your a really good writer, maybe i will see you in the top rated soon :)

lots of love
*~*becky*~*