Comments : A Dying Fight

  • 14 years ago

    by BreatheNoMore

    Nice!!! Keep writing ..check out some of my poems if u get the chance :)

  • 14 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    Nice one.. i like it coz i know how it feel its some of wat i am livin.
    ne ways it seems lyk u know wat u r doin n u r so gud at it so keep it up.
    if u have some free time check out some of ma poems.

  • 14 years ago

    by Hayley

    Wow this is real good ! your a great writer, i know how you feel. keep it up. hugs-hayely

  • 14 years ago

    by .Just Jessie.

    I love this one too... Man, you're talent is going to take you far...

  • 14 years ago

    by Pilar

    Whoa. you're very talented. i know how u feel, i can feel related to this poem.
    take care!


  • 14 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Its so amazing....You are really good. You need to keep doing what your doing, forreal. Lots of love,


  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Very good!