That was awesome...well one of the saddest things ever but i can feel the emotion and you use so much description keep writing!

What a great poem, very powerful, keep up the good work

Wow, fab work, i hope you know it doesn't have to be this way and don't be affraid to speak out, i'm sure it will be better that way :) xox to u

I dont know how you feal about being beat but raped i do and i under stand the feeling it's one of the worst. well i loved the poem so keep up the good work

Wow that was an amazing poem! Very amazing work! It's true too. Thanks.......

Brooke

Wow so moving and deep

Well done, look forward to reading more great poems of yours!

Someone Special

This was a great poem...im sorry though for whats been going on with you.I hope the best for you.
Love ya always,
Stephanie

5/5

Omg this is such an awsome story...so flowing and the rhyming scheme was awsome...please check out mah newest poems.....5/5

Wow this was very good and touching really good job

Wow this was very good and touching really good job