I really love this poema dna i can totallyrelate to it. awesome! =) 5/5

Your title is spelled wrong....it says though?.....i think you might wanna change that....haha ok thats all pleae read my poem "my perfect lover" dont worry its short

Really nice poem, a lot of good ideas and points, you express yourself really well.

Well Done !!!

xxx cici xxx

Your an amazing writer.. very well done

A very touching read excelent in every way form topic to verse and timeing thanks for posting it was an honer to read 5 for you

This is great, seems like you thought a lot! A good way of releasing all those questions you need/want to ask that someone when it just doesn't work out. Good piece again, well done!

Lots of ideas...maybe you could try a different way to put it together. But i like the last part. Good work

5/5 great job i love it
Becky
xoxo

I loved this i know exactly how this feels and i dont think guys think at all period lol, unless its about themselves that is.

Like you don't love me no more

you used a double negative so the dont needs to go or the no needs to be changed to any

other then that GREAT job 5/5

Ohhh, I can relate so so so well! I love this poem. Keep up the great work.

xxMegxx

:( this is very sad and very true of how i am feeling right now. Even more into that and you did an amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

I really loved this poem it is one of the best I have read in a while. The repeating stanza gives me a headach but thas personal prefrence. I really get the emotion and can relate 5/5.

Great job. it kinda lost the meaning after the same phrase being repeated so many times, but the way you said everything pulled it off. great job.

I loved it! 5/5 Great job.

Wow. my fav. one i feel like this sometimes great job. 5/5