Wow..that was...interesting. ive never really read anything so dark like that.
i didnt really understand it tho. but im sure its something that is meaningful to you

Yeah its a pretty dark poem, and every line has a meaning it wasn't written blindly

You're Truly Right, Alot Of Metaphors..My Favorite Line Would be Meaningless disdain conflicted
My words are completely self-inflicted.

It Seems like the whole thing is almost as if theres a bunch of thoughts just completely running through you're mind..Like a bunch of Chaos...Then As you read more you begin to piece it together bit by bit...And It starts to make something in your own mind...Whether Or not it's what you intended it makes sense of something in my head, but probably not the same thing in yours...
Great Poem...You're now officially on my faves...Thanks for posting your name on the boards..I never would have had the chance to have read this..In all honesty and bluntness...5/5

Very good....the only thing i can say is that you didnt start off to well w/ the flow...the first couple lines didnt really go so well like the rest of the poem...otherwise good...i'd give it a 4

Hehe kayla...maybe re read it...it keeps a theme....

It doesn't make all that sense, haha, but the paragraph's do flow nicely with each other, and since you admitted to being tired, I give into it and say it's actually very good. :)

Sheena