Truely an excellent piece . " While my soul touches thin sand " I loved it

Hey.. i like ur poem.. it's really good...
it's so touching... hope u'l post more poems sometime...

Very beautiful poem. And this really hit home because it reminded me of my significant other, while literally bringing tears to my eyes. Thank you very much for sharing that. It was wonderfully written, but together in an amazing and unique flow. I love it! Hope to be seeing more from you.

A great poem once again. This totally flowed perfectly and just got me daydreaming about the wonders of summer. 5/5 luv jess xoxoxoxox

Aw! that was so sweet, but i never knew May was in summer O.o or maybe im wrong? 5/5

Awwl... so romantic... I absolutley loved all the details and it had a great ending nice job! 5/5!

Nice poem.Like the flow even though not all the lines rhyme.