I didn't like this one, I loved it...wow this is amazingly written hun, you really got all of your pain out in this one, I felt it from the beginning to the end!!! Are you ok sweety, tell me what's going on, I want to help you....Havn't heard from you in a looooong time.

*Much love from me to my special friend*

HEy darL!! iTs d0ra. they suspEndEd my 0ld acc0unT s0 i g0t a nEw 0ne. anywaY ill be addinG new p0ems s0on.
this 0ne t0uched my hEarT dEeP!
l0ve ya hUn
l0tz 0f l0ve
-x00o00x-
d0ra

Hey what can i say it was awesome i liked this it was really good you express your feelings well.

Very nice indeed. the metaphores u used were very effective, and helpd to portray your feelings, great job!!

Ruby