I still love you my angel. this is juat another great poem by you. its beautiful. so sweet. he is so lucky. keep writing please. i love your poems. good luck.

This was absolutely brilliant my love. I'm speechless. It was perfect. I love how you described the whole day with that one person you love, and how it seems that words don't need to be spoken for you to understand how much you love each other. I like how not everything rhymes. It makes it original and meaningful. Like it came from the heart, it wasn't something you had to force.

"The sky many shades of beauty,
But still not as beautiful as you."

This was my favorite line out of this already magnificent poem. Every stanza has meaning to it, but that just caught my attention. You are an amazing poet Sarah, and an amazing person. I don't think I can -ever- thank you enough for just being there for me. For being someone to listen to my rants. You may not know it, but it means the world to me. I feel a hell of a lot better everytime. I love you soo much, my pretty pistol. Keep writing these beautiful words.

Take Care,
Renee

Great poem! Excelent!

Wow ...This was excellent....good writing

Its so beautiful!

I loved your poem!!!i think you should leave it in here!!its beautiful =) 5/5

That was really beautiful. and the beginngin quote is NOT plagarism because you gave credit to the due authors of it. anyways, that was an amaxing poem.

"the sky many shades of beauty, but still not as beautiful as you"

that is an amazing line. i love it. it is so adorable. fantastic job. 5/5

This poem was great! it totally reminds me of my boyfriend and i! keep up the good work!!

Awww thats so cute..and that song..we're in this together is a really good song lol..anyway thats a kick ass poem keep it up
stay chill
lizz

Fantastic. I wish I could write like you x