It doesnt really rhyme right but dear a poem is not bout rhyming .... its bout giving feelings in your heart words so others would know how u feel.... & in this u did a great job !
God bless !!
thanks for the support...
love
amy

Very good!!love it love it love IT!!! it was so beautiful....5/5

This was a great poem....i have nothing bad to say, good job!

I love it it is great awesome

It didnt have much of a flow. but still it was good.

It was pretty good,could use a little better rythim but liked it you expressed your feelings well