I didnt understand this all that much..

Lol i think you don't understand things with any meaning other then face value because its something you need to work on.....

Sounds like such a....CALMING feeling...i like it...your flow was awsome...and sorry i cant critique you better....but...i reallly didnt nothing wrong...i guess there were a couple parts i didnt get...but thats just b/c im a freakin dumbass

I love the peom...the flow and the beautiful choice of words. I did not favor the third paragraph, but I still loved it...I do believe you'll be going on my favorites list. :) Great job.

Sheena

Hahahaha..a "sick" poem...nice one there...i like this poem...maybe i should get sick more often...lol....haha...nice work:D

I know the feelin your talking about it was very good 5/5

Wow this one is just uterly amazing...so original....5/5...sorry i couldnt vote though b/c i read this b/4 and it wouldnt let me vote 5....o well...lol