Very nice and original. keep it up

sammie

I don't understand why this poem doesn't have more the two votes or more then one comment. This is a very beautiful poem. I find not faults with it besides the I's need to be capitilized. This poem has a lot of meaning and you have placed the love the you feel for our God Almighty into it. Excellent Job! Keep up the magnificent work. 5/5

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Letty

Great job on this piece. Very paeceful feelings come to one when it is read. The message is wonderful.
Take Care Cindy

Short n sweet

5/5

dont forget to check my poems . please do r.r.c

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Excellent poem..showing d large amount of faith.
i giv u 5/5.

Beautiful poem. :)

Alka,

I really liked this and you are so right: to praise Him leads to happiness:)
I love how you capitalized the words referring to Him. Some people don't and I think that is very disrespectful.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

That was very beautiful, and uplifting! The flow was great, and it made me smile, 5/5!

-mandy :)

Very original. Great flow. Beautiful dedication to our creator. Good job, 5/5. Em x

A truly lovely poem. Thank you for your comments on my winning poem

Very good

Gentle and a praiseworthy piece. Lord is himself benevolent and merciful and this is a good exposure for his praiseworthiness.
Keep writing:)

Praiseworthy. that's a might prayer and may God see to it that your loyalty is rewarded.

Great work!!! Very fair and I can feel the presence of peace...while reading this.

An uplifting and encouraging prayer. The sincerity of this
prayer is truly felt..lovely!