Comments : Forever gone

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    AW THIS SERIOUSLY MADE ME CRY...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Sad..yet again but very beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    WoW...This is the best drunk driving poem I've read in a long long while....
    Ash

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Aww so sad and soo sweet. I really enjoyed this one and the ending made me say "aww."

    ok here's the problem, you said "as time go by the pain may subside" and it should be "as time goes by the pain may subside"

    Keep writing, I enjoyed this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Im sry that, that happened but again great job you have serious talent great job keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hmm...this is pretty good...but don't think it's good enough...well..still think it's very nice...