Comments : Left to Mourn

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    Hun... don't leave... this is far from your fate.

  • 18 years ago

    by complication in my heart

    Heyyy-
    Thanks for the comment on my poem. I like this one alot...its great...you are a good writer...5 for you...

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole Maree

    This was real deep but so beautiful and you are so right it's so weird but i completely understand your feelings. Keep up the awesome work. You're such an amazing writer because all your poems have so much feeeling and thought in them. Take care. Luv Nicole =)

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Wow beautiful hun, very touching, I loved the third verse, very beautuflyy done & I can relate to it all, great work my dear keep it up lubzz you

  • Hey luvin the poem!!! keep writing! i can totally relate! i no how u feel 2 be left out while other people are happy And have it all but u feel like u have nothing...! i love your writing technique, check out more of my poems they remind me a bit of yours, read a life of total unhappiness, its my favourite! thanx 4 ur comment on my peom! im here if u need someone to talk 2!

    Luv Maddison xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Nice one hun...