WOW... that was brilliant.... i admire your riting... You're very very talented... Keep riting.. i look forward to more poems. The emotions were very powerful!
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Excellent imigery. I felt I was there. Keep writing. (I think I won't make girls angry any more, not that I ever did. LoL,)

That was amazing pice.... i love it...that poem is got to be one of my faviort. by the way thanks for thanks comment.

Woo! yet another stunner from stef luv it hunni x x x gr8 use of words-u sound like adam lol butin a gud way x x x

Pretty crazy an exciting one... it was really good though 5/5 i love your last stanza ~ your red wine staining the floor... that was amazing great thought then the last two lines were pretty cool to nice words i like how you put them together
~ sarah

There you sat
Below me
You were all
That I could see

theres a way that just makes them flow into each other, i had to comment cos it's so cool! lol!

lv ,a x

Amazing. You were right it sound alot like the one I wrote. I read it and see what I want to do to my father because of all the pain he gave me. And to all the other men that have abused me in my life.

Woah that was dark ... but really good. i really liked your word use and imagry. i felt like i was right there in the scene! keep it up!

~~Jay

Woow!!very touching and full of meaning!thanx for commenting on my poem...means alot!!keep smiling!!ur an extremely talented writer!!xxxxx

Hey! brilliant poem! quite chilling, which just makes it even better 2 read lol the poem works great and you close it with a very good last stanza. keep up the good work!