This is very good...but the rhyming in the second stanza first couple lines seem kinda forced....but otherwise its good

Pretty good, Though I'm not a fan of repetitive parts.

I think your poem is very descriptive .
A poem of an undying love and hope ..

A day without you would be a day with no sunrise
like tears of rain , that would cloud over my eyes
* Just seemed to pop into my head for some reason*

It is a very nice poem. it could be a little longer though. but its very cute 4/5

Ohhhh...i know how u feel...i really love it...this guy you wrote it for is very lucky....you make me want to appreciate my boyfriend for everything that he has done for me...i just want you to know that u r a very great writer...keep up the great job...5/5