Wow... that was power ful...
purdy good!

I'd write you a private one but i cant, so, im okay for the most part, but life sucks big time right now. Your comments really mean a lot to me. It makes me smile to see that someone will actually comment. THANX

(heart) AsH (bleedingBlackRoses)

This was a nice poem! but the flow was forced!

and it had some gramatical and spelling misstake!

but overall!!! it was nice keep it up!!! 4/5