Comments : Memories

  • 18 years ago

    by Vicissitude Of Fate

    That was a nice poem..sorry i coukldnt be there back then..soirry i couldnt be here.....sorry......byebye...

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I walked around the camp house,
    And looked into the trees.
    I saw a clubhouse, good as new,
    And a tear rolled down my cheek.

    The second And...I think it would sound better if you changed it to something as, "as" or such...it just makes more sense. Still, its a very good poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very good poem.Long and good.Your really good jess.

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Awesome poem babi girl. i loved ur poem so much. i'd walk the few hundred miles separating us just so u'd have a shoulder to cry on. i love u babe! 5/5
    eLiZaBeTh

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    it's awsome.
    u r realy talented!
    5/5 for sure

    take care.

    adios!

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by Shannon

    Hey Jessica
    I really luv all your poems, they have such a reality to them,this one is one of my favourites. Do u put alot of thought into them or do the words just come naturally?
    From Your Partner In Crime And Annoyance.

  • 18 years ago

    by hunnibunnz

    Aww..jess, i loved this. It almost put meh to tears*sniff sniff*..lolz *huggles* great job hun!

    Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aww how sweeet... dam dis was hell gwd wel i think so lol
    gwd job hun keep it up
    mwa luv ya
    luv dia mwa xoxxoxoox

  • 18 years ago

    by Neil

    Hmmm so sad kinda reminds me wen i remember my frends n grampa...i loved my grampa so much... i see his ghost all da time... thanks jess 4 dat wonderful poem...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow Jess that was really touching. I know how it feels to have a best friend move away. It really hurts and this poem made me remember the pain that I felt when she moved away. This poem made me cry and in my words that means that I love it. It was absolutely p-e-r-f-e-c-t. Keep on cause I love to read everything!!100/5

    TAKE CARE-
    stargazer38

  • 18 years ago

    by shavaughn

    That poem made me cry good job