I think its ok its not bad any way
i hope u like it

Hey Josh ^_^
I think it's more than ok...it's a really good poem, but may be you could add a little more to it, so, it won't be so short. Overall, it's a great poem and I like it 5/5 Take care and keep it up.

I like it ,thxz forrating commenting on mine.
always,
xoxoxo

Josh, hm..that was good i guess. But it is missing a lot.. :( Im sorry to be so mean!! *runs away* Maybe if you add more graphics, and emotion it will be better. Hope to read more of your poems.

-Jennifer.