(some correction needs to be made on the 5th line)

I must admit, I got a little confused reading this but after reading it over again...I think understand now. 5th stanza is my favorite...I love the concept of this. great poem. keep up the good work

I totally understand this one hun. The beauty within ones heart is more important than the beauty on the outside. Whether or not we look "beautiful" on the outside, we'll always have inside. The strong people realise that. Great write my friend.

Love always,
- Kalah.

This is a very strong poem, I thought you were writing about me at first... The manly legs part.. It was amazing, inner beauty is the most important thing that anyone can have, though we cannot visibly see it...

Well done, brilliant poem..

xxxxx

Interesting concept, though I must admit, the first paragraph made me cringe. The second made me think that the narrative was unhappy with their appearance, but being unable to change it. yet the last one contradicted that. An interesting read, from what I have read from you, you seem to be anti the beauty stereotype. Nice job though.

I love poetry like this. Not knowing where the writer is going until you get to the last stanza, it always makes for an exciting read.
The message is a great one and the depth in which it is written really bring's that home! Keep it up~Holly

It's ana interesting poem and not one i'm used to reading so it was great. i agree with jj, reading over it twice helped me make sense of it..
take care xoxo

Alright that did it. Now I am adding you to my favorites. Now see what you did, lol? But if I find something that I find amiss I am telling you about it, lol.

So true, external beauty is overrated!!

Oh my gosh i love this poem!!!
But i started cracking up at the first line but after i got your point i thought it was amazing!!!