2day,evri1 ws so blind(tyrs hidn bhind mi eyes)

by Avrii Monrielle   Sep 23, 2005


2day no one knew i wus crying
bcuz i was smiling
wid mi friends
they did not kno i was sad
i wuz just dancing with a rock band
the rock band dint kno cuz i wuz busy singing
i grinned at evri 1 and d mic wuz so sweet
den sum 1 gave me an ice cream after rehearsal
i smiled and said thnx
.....
they sed
"i kno ur sad"

i asked
"how do u kno?"

they replied
"lets just say i'm supposed to protect u"

i looked up at them and gave them a hug...and inhaled their sweet scent

the only thing in months that didnt smell like death

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  • 18 years ago

    by Foresaken_Tears

    Sh.it!! That was really powerful, fantastic ending, you should really write up a version which you cn post under sadness n depression so more ppl cn c it. Its a really poignant piece amongst a lot of very ordinary work. For this I commend you,
    xXxForesakenxXx