I like this! The format is unusual but easy to read. I also like the quick pace it added to the intensity of the context. Well done~Holly

Unusual and interesting read. like the others, I love the quick pace...made it exciting to read. I have nothing to critique about it...great job! keep up the good work

Different. I don't really know what to say about it Rebecca. I liked the way it was written, seemed like a sparratic flow, which I thought was cool

Oh, very nice. A very nice flow, you used little amount of words but packed them with description and emotion. Definetely a well written piece of poetry!
"God flicks you away,
with a sweep of His hand."
Great imagery in those lines. I could really picture a devine spirit flicking a human, just like a kid flicks ants.

Whoa that was really good, I liked the words you used, and the poem really put a picture in my head, I think the part where you put "god flicks you away,with a sweep of his hand" was really good, nice description, great job, 5/5.

That was an awesome poem..Great job..Short Simple but yet powerful and meaningful..Excellent Job
5/5
~The Broken Man~