Comments : Death by love

  • You're name haunts my every move,
    the things you did i cant ever prove,

    sounds like your havin a tough time...
    lots of emotion in your poem, the title really drew me in, too. sometimes, love just sux babe. pull through and stay strong, stand tall and give life all you got.
    (heart) AsH (BleedingBlackRoses)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I'm sorry for your pain sweetie.
    I loved this, I thought there was so much emotion in it and I could sense the pain behind the words.
    I thought the flow was a little off at times, but apart from that, it was excellent.