Our Great Nation

by Ashlee Nicole   Sep 25, 2005


**Hey you guys just so you know..lol..Me and my friend challenged eachother and told e/o to write a poem about whatever we chose...And he made me do one on our flag...I think it's kinda good..Not my greatest, buthey...
Just vote and stuff so we know what you think about them..
Thanks Ash**

The Red, White and Blue,
And all 50 Stars.
Which color are you,
The red or white Bars?

For They say we're united,
Liberty and Justice for all.
And while we're all divided,
Our great nation will fall.

Soldiers over seas,
To hold up our great flag.
This American Disease,
Filling up the body bags.

Our President must take action!
So he sends your son away.
This is our Defense Reaction,
To keep enemies at bay.

The Red, White and Blue,
You saw the day you died.
You held your flag so true,
While Bush just hid inside.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Ahhh l LOVE this F.u.c.k bush haha great poem, really good i loved it it flowed well some rhymes were off but who cared 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Im not american, but i can tell u thats so true. its sad that that happens, and this poem really said it!

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    Wow, that's really true, it's short, but states the facts about what really happens. Great write!!

    Love Always,
    Katie Schettler