Comments : Lost in a world of piercing screams

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Maddison,
    Its a sad poem as a depression poem should be but it's also a great poem 5/5 nice job...I'm sorry that you have to feel this way, but don't give up...always keep it up ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Caroline

    Im sorry that you feel how you do, great poem, sad but strong meaning. Good luck in life

  • 18 years ago

    by Unity

    U dont want too die , you just have too stay strong and prove too your parents that ur better then them , which you most probably are , just don't believe it yet ..well u shud start believing in yourself ..F*c* them ,you live your life ..how it suits you ..and what makes u happy ..just try not too break they're rules and get caught ;) ..dont do something that'll get you intro trouble ..but live the way that makes YOU happy....keep up the awesome work , very well ... expressed and written
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