Wonderful poem. Great job.

This poem has a lot of emotion in it... which is good lol. Not all of it flowed great, but thats ok as long as you got out what you wanted to. Good job!

Brilliant peice, itense and well written. the flow was a bit off in places but the poems overall strengh made up for this.

5/5

Nice poem. It's very truthful.

I see you crying when i read this.
..xx

This one is really good!
5/5