This is extremely creative. I would have never thought of writing anything this way.....it seems like you put a lot of thought into it. You're amazing. I know you're going to make it big.
Excellent Job! I loved It!

Love Always
DFK

Hey aden, haha, what happend to the y, mhuhahahaha. huggles it gud btw 5/5

That's funny but true all at the same time. i loved it.

Wow creative i never would have thought of something like this so gd job xox

Hahaha... very well put... it was funny but i would also like to mention that i can really relate to it... good write.. something very realistic....

keep writing, Aden...

Love,
Ipsita